The Paper Bleeds
It was an amazing journey
All the spectacular ways you torchered me
All the lines I wrote were never enough
And I knew it
I was the jackass for not leaving
For not leaving you alone
But all the lines were for you
But so much in coexistence with me
The lines black on white
Red on white
Tragic misspellings
Dripping notes
They were never noticed
For all the Hell in myself
I would trade
For you to kill me again
All the spectacular ways you torchered me
All the lines I wrote were never enough
And I knew it
I was the jackass for not leaving
For not leaving you alone
But all the lines were for you
But so much in coexistence with me
The lines black on white
Red on white
Tragic misspellings
Dripping notes
They were never noticed
For all the Hell in myself
I would trade
For you to kill me again
posted by The Surgeon at 9/01/2005
2 Comments:
Hello- This site is amazing, very dark and deep. But about this particular piece, Why not tell her? It's for a girl you've avoided no doubt-? (Or a man)-Either way, talk to the girl(boy?)Or write to her/him, you would do wonders with that.
If I am wrong,please explain this piece.
Keep up the excellent work.
Write on!
hi... thank you very much for your comment i value each one...the person that inspired me to write this piece was someone who i might have not talked to enough.. but also i might have talked to her too much.. i could never really figure out what went on inside her head..but in any case there is not much i can do about it now... thanks again for the comment
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